Im kommenden Oktober werde ich wahrscheinlich ein Auslandspraktikum in Irland absolvieren. Daher würde ich gerne um Rückmeldungen für das Motivationsschreiben haben, damit es möglichst korrekt ist:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to introduce myself as a proper candidate for an internship abroad in Ireland and illustrate my motivation in the following:
Currently I am doing my apprenticeship as an industrial clerk at the xxx group GmbH.
The possibility of making practical experiences in your company provoked my interest because it is a perfect way to improve my language-skills on the one hand and to get to know the Irish culture and tradition on the other.
As my CV indicates, I enjoy learning foreign languages. I possess very good English-skills in speech and writing as well as basic French and Spanish skills. Furthermore, I am very interested in different cultures and traditions as I already made good experiences by taking part in a 4-week exchange program to Adelaide, Australia in 2013.
The second topic I am very interested in and which I hope to learn more about by serving an internship is business and economics. Since my early youth I am interested in this topic so I made for example a 2-week internship at a travel agency in 2012. During this internship, I had to deal with many types of customers and realize different commercial tasks. Additionally, I decided to intensify my economic- and business knowledge by doing an apprenticeship as an industrial clerk.
I am very reliable, thorough and communicative. Furthermore I enjoy facing new challenges and getting to know new people, so I am very sure that I will be a huge benefit to your company.
I would be very grateful to be given the opportunity to be part of your company. I am looking forward to visit you soon in Ireland.
Thank you for considering my application and I’m looking forward to your response.
Sollte da auch noch was von meiner Schulbildung rein und wie sieht das grammatikalisch und allgemein aus? Vielen Dank im Voraus!